EMO LOVE!

WTH????
Only 3 people read my poem, which I expected.
Actually, I expected a few more, but hey. I'm not really complaining.
But someone gave it a 5.
So yeaaah.
Pretty funny/horrible.
Even better, there's THIS ONE!
I didn't like the second one as much. The first one was whiny, yeah, and it's what EVERY teenage girl on Quizilla is doing ("I love you, I wish you loved me, you hold my heart, and I cry." XP), but it's better than, "Sleeping, dreaming, darkness, love," crap in the second one.
So enjoy, my fellow critics. Feel free to comment. Or vomment. It's all good.